12/7/07

Love Poem

"In LOVE" Poem!!

She has been questioning herself
Cause she wants to know how he felt
Last night she told him what is in her heart
Her dream, her future and her past

She doesn’t really know if he even cares
About all the things she has tried to share
But she is sure she has to tell him anyway
She could not even wait for another day

At first she thought it was just a little crush
But after talking to him, she felt so blush
Oh… She loves him more than she can say
Please love her back that’s what she pray

She is now just waiting for his answer
To make her know all her wonders
Coz she is confused stress and fear
So please answer her back because she is dying here


"Translation"

This poem is a narrative poem. It is about a girl who felt in love with someone who is not really interested in her even she already told him that she loves him and now she is just waiting for his answer. This poem obviously uses a lot of rhyme. In this poem the reader’s feeling depend on the answer of a boy. If the answer is yes (he also loves her) that will make them feel happy but if the answer is no (he does not love her) that will make them feel the opposite way. The persona of this poem is the girl who felt in love with someone.

1 comment:

Jasper said...

Nice poem, but not yours I believe. And not your comments either. And still almost all links on your blog in Thai. That is too bad...